Task.

Correction:

This is a winter park. A snow-covered grass is what calls your attention.

There are a lot of leafless, naked and twining trees. A snow-covered bench and table near. It is a cloudy day and it is very cold. It is peacefull and quite because there isn´t a clear soul. It seems like everybody has gone. The sky is very cloudy, it is a scary sky. There is chocolate smell because near it stands a chocolate post. The snow is soft, delicate and slippey. But not rough. There are things on sale by a big tree standing near.

It is a nice park but it seems more like a desert. I like the silent and calm atmosphere and the idea of drinking hot chocolate in winter.

Before:

This is a winter park. A snow covered grass is what catches your  attention. There are a lot of leafless, naked and twining trees. A  snow-covered bench and table near. It is a clowdy day and is very cold. There is no people in here. It seems like every body has gone. The sky is full of clouds, it is a scary sky. There is chocolate smell because near there is a chocolate post. The snow is soft, delicated and slippery. But not rough.  There are things in sale there by the big tree. It is a nice park but it is like desert. I like the silent  and calm atmosphere and the idea of drinking hot chocolate in winter.